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Cunning Visitor

Cunning visitor From behind the garden shed sly eyes observe the human condition. With tail held high he retreats, pronouncing us unworthy of further comtemplation

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Ken Rone

Date: 2/8/2022 11:36:00 AM

Yes. I saw her just last night, through the window. She said to herself..."that's enough ". Best - Ken

Leotis Hargrove

Date: 2/8/2022 2:42:00 AM

Nice! I like this poem a lot. Thank you for sharing!

Benjamin Mitchell

Date: 12/4/2010 9:21:00 PM

Haha this kinda stuff is right up my ally as far as Reading poetry goes. Very nice.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/17/2008 7:19:00 AM

When I look at what man has done in the last 100 years, I wonder which of us is more intelligent, the "Cunning Visitor" or man. Have a wonderful day. Vince

Michael Torres

Date: 11/15/2008 2:39:00 PM

Scary this cunning visiter. Nice Write Barbara will comment on the rest later. God bless Micahel

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/15/2008 10:34:00 AM

Well, this seems to be turning into a guess the animal muse game LOL. I think a poem with cunning in its title, sly to describe the eyes, and about a beast that is unsure of humans so that it retreats, must be about a fox. But, whatever the subject, the poem is magnificent and delivers such a visual personality to the animal of our choice. Love, Nigel

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/15/2008 6:17:00 AM

This is so real, what goes on behind our place on a daily basis! We a multitude of squirrels, and a few jack-rabbits in the grove of trees, that treat us with the same contempt! Take a look, then stick up their little noses and go on their way! Very cute poem, Barbara! ~ Carrie