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Cunning thoughts

cunning thoughts taking shots at my body I want to believe but my inner guts are stopping me warning me to stay cool stay to true to my true self cunning thoughts flashing lights questioning me what's wrong and right asking me to pick a side and take a ride to explore my pride how cunning just like fire, burning and fuel my curiosity like what are my priorities? crafty like a fox I'm forced to think outside the box what is coming? How close?

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Date: 11/17/2020 5:57:00 PM
Love that second stanza especially, Jones. -- The scourge of our age. :) gw
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Date: 11/4/2020 11:08:00 AM
Very, very interesting, Jones. It is so important that we be tuned in to our inner voices. You write so tightly, succinctly. I loved it. Thanks!
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Jones Muta
Date: 11/4/2020 11:19:00 AM
Thank you so much. It feels great to be understood.
Date: 10/30/2020 12:51:00 PM
Hello Jones Muta, listen to your inner voice it will give you the answer you need. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/24/2021 3:54:00 PM
Hello Jones Muta, Welcome to poetry Soup. Iread this poem twice. Enjoy your evening my friend.