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cumulonimbus

they rose majestic and magnificent
and swirled before my eyes
they stole my breath my heart
transported floated in the skies

and to the count of seven
I stood suspended in the vault of heaven


AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Seeing this one again. I am going to fave it. It is so magnificent
Gauthier Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 6:09 PM
ah, most appreciated ~ thanks, Andrea
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 8:08 PM
Love this poetic style, Line! ~ Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 3:51 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon ~
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 1:07 PM
wow, what an impressive poem AND the title that went with it
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 7:54 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea ~
Empress Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 10:34 AM
So breathtaking and magical, love the way it flows so flawlessly! And the picture used too goes well with the poem. The last two lines really stood out for me! Also wanted to thank you for my placement in your contest, thank you. Happy holidays. Sending you light
Gauthier Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment ~
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