Verlena S. Walker Poet Couplet

Cultured

CULTURED

Once I was initiated.
Then I made it.

Once I was negated.
Today I am contemplated.

Now I am a jazzy lady.
They call me Classy Daisy.

I'm upward bound.
I'm never down.

I am so amazing.
I am sophisticated!

~Rhyme Battle! (Round 3)! Free Poetry Contest Entry~
~Entry Date: March 02, 2014~
~Motif: Rhyme Couplet~

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Heather Secrest March 3, 2014 at 8:19 PM I'm always impressed by a great rhyme and yours are amazing! Good luck in the contest! Great write! Verlena S. Walker March 3, 2014 at 9:24 PM Thanks Heather... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2014 at 2:41 PM What makes a person sophisticated? I enjoyed the lightness of this write and it made me smile. Daisy's have that effect on me, especially classy ones. Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2014 at 3:39 PM I would agree. Verlena S. Walker March 3, 2014 at 3:38 PM Rick, living a god life does... Verlena

Rob Carter March 3, 2014 at 2:27 PM Nice positive vibe. A pleasing good rhyme. Verlena S. Walker March 3, 2014 at 3:39 PM Thanks Rob.. Verlena

Mark Peterson March 3, 2014 at 2:09 PM Yes you are--all these things. Mark Peterson March 3, 2014 at 4:48 PM Right, but these images, feelings and pronouncements cannot be summoned from nowhere. They must come from a genuine source--in this case, you. Verlena S. Walker March 3, 2014 at 3:40 PM Thanks Mark... You imagine this is me when Daisy is Daisy:). Verlena

Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2014 at 6:48 AM - A happy & positive: "Classy Daisy" - Pleased to read - well done, Verlena ! - Luck in contest !! - oxox // Anne-Lise ;) Verlena S. Walker March 3, 2014 at 6:50 AM Thanks Anne-Lise... Verlena

Edd Dino March 3, 2014 at 4:54 AM Nice flow, nice rhyme! Good work. Verlena S. Walker March 3, 2014 at 6:35 AM Thanks Edwin... Verlena

Deb Wilson March 2, 2014 at 7:49 PM Nice rhyming there Verlena ! way to go!...luv,Deb Verlena S. Walker March 2, 2014 at 8:12 PM Thanks Deb... Verlena