Funom Makama Poet Rhyme

Cube of Success So Sugary

The trademark was set to reach and to beat
challenge is accepted to achieve the feat
the reward is glamorous- that is the seat
enticing to the Lion is the captured meat
knows its class and never will settle for wheat
gathering the harvest, deserving to eat
crossing the huddles and facing the heat
tasting such a good life definitely needs a repeat
the road was piercing with lots of defeat
but this story ends with success so neat.

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Pashang Salehi January 25, 2016 at 6:55 PM I do not know whether or not you are a lion that achieved the feat or seeking meat :) Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:17 AM Still alive in the quest but the meat is very very close. Thank you so much Salehi

Lin Lane January 14, 2016 at 11:18 AM A happy ending ;) This type of write, with ending rhyme in each line is difficult to do and still make perfect sense, but you've achieved success neatly, too, Funom. Well done. Funom Makama January 25, 2016 at 12:43 PM Thank you so much Lin Lane...