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Cube Deposit

we're looking at this huge deposit where the cubes are millimetrically placed juxtaposing one by one with no space left so the columns are rising uniformly until they almost reached the ceiling soon a new column is raised in the same way completing rows and lines and series advancing the amounts from the back until gradually occupying all the spaces finally reaching the top when all columns are filled the door closes automatically then we will look at a huge empty deposit where the cubes will be millimetrically placed juxtaposing one by one with no space left and so it goes on forever and ever

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/8/2022 6:34:00 PM

This poem seems almost architectural to me...i.e., the columns "completing rows and lines and series...." The final thought is infinity, which I'm assuming is not achievable, or are you writing about "a focal point?" Very good writing!

Marco Chies
Date: 3/8/2022 6:48:00 PM

in fact I intended to write CUBE in a 'constructivist' way, when I wrote this poetry what came to my mind were Poe's words about Raven's creation, which combined technique with other elements for poetic construction. I couldn't get there, of course... I also tried to reproduce a feeling of listening to industrial-style rock.