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10/9/2025 for Create A Cuatro Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Cuatro-Sandcastles

Once, we gazed through spray,
proudly, over our sandcastles.
Again, our eyes meet.
Do you still feel the same today?
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 5:25 PM
a lovely memory...liked the end question...best wishes with this contest entry as well
Crandall Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 6:45 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:18 PM
Your "Sandcastles" is a fun write... "Good Luck" I also did SANDCASTLES. I love the beach. Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Crandall Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 2:20 PM
Thanks, Paula!
Sharma Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:45 PM
Nice memory to share! All the best for the contest.
Crandall Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:50 PM
Thanks, Vandana!
Wolf Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha. Did she run away? Or maybe dig all the way down to 'China?'
Crandall Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 8:54 PM
Maybe, she dug down to China? As a kid, I learned that's where you end up if start from California and you go straight down far enough, although it doesn't really look like you'd come up there when you look at a globe.
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