Notes About The Poem

“Building sandcastles is the art of celebrating the now, enjoying creative moments in the sun — not fearing the tide.”
“Children build sandcastles; adults build empires. Both must savor the moment and learn to let go.”
“We build sandcastles, knowing the tide will come in. Therein lies their beauty.”
9 October, 2025 - for CREATE A CUATRO Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

sandcastle

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Cuatro-Sandcastles

Tiny hands mold sand.
Older hands build solid empires. 
Both face the same tide—
Sipping joy in wish to withstand.
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Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 3:33 AM
What a delightful winning work. Descriptive, creative and on target. Way to go. Congratulations to you!! Sara K
Anderson Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 10:04 AM
thanks a lot for the feedback. cheers
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 3:29 PM
All these cuatros are so amazing that I see in Nette's winner list. Congratulations
Anderson Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 4:31 PM
Thanks very much for the feedback. Cheers, John
Sharma Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Very wise and clever take on the prompt. All the best for the contest.
Anderson Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 4:32 PM
Thanks for your kind words and feed-back. Cheers, John
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