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Poem written for and submitted to CREATE A CUATRO Poetry Contest, Nette Onclaud, Sponsor, October 9, 2025.

CUATRO-SANDCASTLES

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ salt fingers pry the walls apart the moat surrenders, spire bends~ this is how creation ends: a slow dissolve, a work of heart
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Goldsmith Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:28 PM
Your "SANDCASTLES" is a fun write. I love this Pretty Picture of the beach. "Good Luck" I also did SANDCASTLES. Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:23 PM
thanks, Paula, for your visits...they're always a welcome delight. hugsSara
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:27 PM
particularly love your expression "a work of heart" ~ great way to end a poem of course !
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:22 PM
thank you for noticing and for sharing your thoughts.
Sharma Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 7:29 AM
Beautiful imagination :) Best wishes.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:22 PM
awww, thank you.
Meadows Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Lovely. Well done.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:22 PM
thank you, sweet Daisy.
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