Cuatro - SANDCASTLES

Sun yawns on grains chained
to sandcastles as cool sea waves
rise, taking away
what the caramel dream had reigned.

 10/13/2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 3:13 PM
Awesome winning work. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 10:51 PM
Many congratulations on your placement.
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 3:20 PM
Oooh. Excellent use of imagery and assonance congrats on the win here.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 1:35 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "SANDCASTLES" write again. Have a blessed day with your win...................
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October 13, 2025 at 9:02 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "SANDCASTLES" write. Love your ending. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.................
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