Danny Derden Poet Quatrain

CUATRO-- SANDCASTLES

CUATRO-- SANDCASTLES
Category: QUATRAIN
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date: October 9, 2025

purposeless purpose
constructed in wash away sand,
ruled by wind and waves
my life an ebbing tide circus.

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Sara Kendrick November 1, 2025 at 3:24 AM What a delightful winning work. Descriptive, creative and on target. Way to go. Congratulations to you!! Sara K

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2025 at 3:23 PM I love how you compared it to your life. Wonderful win . congrats Danny Derden October 15, 2025 at 4:43 PM Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2025 at 10:03 AM Excellent take! Danny Derden October 10, 2025 at 11:12 AM Thank you.

Dr. Vandana Sharma October 9, 2025 at 9:48 PM Really, an amazing take on the prompt. All the best for the contest. Danny Derden October 10, 2025 at 6:12 AM thank you.

sara Etgen-Baker October 9, 2025 at 5:42 PM wow, an outstanding metaphor! well done for the contest. Danny Derden October 9, 2025 at 5:54 PM thank you

Noel Onat October 9, 2025 at 10:19 AM Deeply expressed! I think you meant the 3rd line to be the 4th...4th line. 8 syllables rhymes with 1st line, 5 syllables. Just saying, all the best! Danny Derden October 9, 2025 at 10:38 AM oh drat...i mixed up the rhyme...i can fix that...i hope...thanks for the catch.