Cuando Estas Conmigo

Entiendo el viento cuando
                      tu cabello sopla...
                      Es cuando dices que si
                      para mi !
                      Entiendo el sol cuando
                       todo va oscuro y en la oscuridad,
                       Percibo tu mirada de fuego
                       sublimándome!
                       Entiendo la lluvia cuando
                       derramas tus felices lágrimas
                       mojándome de emoción!
                       Me doy cuenta entonces que
                       la tormenta,
                       es solo la manifestación
                       mas vibrante
                       de nuestro amor ...!

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Date: 9/28/2020 11:33:00 AM
Hello Alakas, I can not read this poem you created. What language is this poem typed in? Is it about an area where you live? Salute Darlene your friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2020 10:23:00 AM
Hello Alakas, Wow! You are very lucky to be able to speak all these languages. Did you learn them in school? German to! Wow! Yes English and Portuguese. Wow! is all i can say. Salute Darlene.
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Date: 9/28/2020 3:36:00 PM
Yes i speak spanish, itallan, And a Little bit french, few german...salute, Darlene alkas Ps, naturally portuguese And english...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2020 3:27:00 PM
Hello Alakas, I went to the poem and I found that I have commented on the poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2020 3:21:00 PM
Hello Alakas, you wrote in Spanish! Oh! In Brazil the language is Portuguese, I did not know that. Do you speak Spanish? I ask because you wrote a poem in Spanish. Salute Darlene. okay i will see perfect Understanding.
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Date: 9/28/2020 1:07:00 PM
No, dear It is simply spanish, here we speak portuguese,.This poem i wrote in english... See PERFECT UNDERSTANDING, on alkas best poems, or use Google translator...it Means, when you are With me (a lover girl) salute, alkas
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