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Crystalline Winter Hollow

Crystalline Winter Hollow A camp fire against solid hollow black Holds the cold and limited visibility Hours come born without warning Near to night, wild on the snow storm A dim light draws us home vulnerable It is a dot in the distance Illusions of fireplace and warmth A hunt for life between each snowflake Moving on as the snow deepens under foot Each step is sunken treasure subaqueous submerged Cold and water take their risk in winters grip The lake may not take the weight of passage Camp fire is a long way off now So is that dot of light called home Frozen images are all that’s left Hidden there on the distance, crystalline alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/25/2014 9:07:00 AM
A distance light brings hope on a grueling journey...you took me along with your amazing imagery, Earl! :))
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Date: 11/25/2014 10:32:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments. Thank you also for taking the winters cold trip with me. Stay warm. Take care. Earl
Date: 11/24/2014 8:43:00 PM
this write is breath taking Earl so much emotion in your lines hugs 7 + fav
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Date: 11/24/2014 9:02:00 PM
Hi Shadow, Thank you so much. I appreciate your observations. I am also very happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks again. Take care. Earl
Date: 11/24/2014 4:48:00 PM
Earl the imagery is sublime - I was with you every step of the journey:-) That bright point of light is so comforting the nearer you get to home:-) It's a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2014 5:03:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you so much and thank you for being with me on the journey. The camp fire was going out and the storm was outrageous. We simply had to move towards the light. Have a pleasant night. Earl
Date: 11/24/2014 2:17:00 PM
Great poem; love the imagery and the metaphor. So much to harvest here.
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Date: 11/24/2014 3:14:00 PM
Hi Faye, Thank you so much. I've been working on it for a few days to make it solid....well, frozen solid that is... Glad you enjoyed it. Take care. Earl
Date: 11/24/2014 11:28:00 AM
- A great poem Earl - image is perfect, touching, deep ... and ... (ice cold :) - Thanks for the nice visit on my Haiku x 40 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2014 12:11:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise, Thank you. Regarding your poem; The Haiku is not as easy as it looks. I can see you put some thought and effort into your creation to get it precise and right. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Take care. Earl

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