Sara Kendrick Poet Crystalline

Crystalline Number Three

Attentive buck hears, not a cosset. 
The snow's last crackle at sunset.

Inspired by: Andrea Dietrich's contest Frozen In Crystalline
9 syllables line 1
8 syllables line 2

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James Fraser December 8, 2014 at 1:27 PM Nice imagery Sara, love it, James :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 30, 2014 at 3:10 PM Beautiful imagery, Sara! Congrats to you on an awesome win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Skat A November 30, 2014 at 1:56 AM SARA, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 29, 2014 at 9:59 PM wowoow! love that second line..! congratulations.. ! :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 29, 2014 at 9:59 PM Hope you are better Sara.. :) God bless you more.. :)!

Sandra Haight November 29, 2014 at 6:31 PM Hi Sara, congratulations on your win! Your words do paint the image so well! Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton November 29, 2014 at 1:25 PM perfect picture Sara congrats on win hugs

Earl Schumacker November 29, 2014 at 12:27 PM Hi Sara, This is a uniquely interesting poem. Nice structure also. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl

Jan Allison November 29, 2014 at 12:25 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn November 29, 2014 at 12:24 PM Lovely Sara...congrats to you

Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2014 at 9:26 AM I like this one Sara, congratulations.

Abdul Malik Mandani November 29, 2014 at 8:43 AM Very nice. congrats.

Paul Callus November 29, 2014 at 6:28 AM Lovely write, Sarah, especially the second winning line! Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Joseph May November 29, 2014 at 6:17 AM Congrats on your win Sara

Kayod5 Kayode November 29, 2014 at 1:25 AM Congrats on the win Sara,this indeed stands out...huggs

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2014 at 1:00 AM gosh, sara, you made me go look up cosset in the dictionary. It was the second line that really got my attention. I loved that "last cackle" at sunset!!! congrats in my contest.

Shadow Hamilton November 26, 2014 at 3:11 AM great Sara I can see it standing there listening gl in contest hugs

Jack Horne November 25, 2014 at 3:21 PM lovely crystalline, my friend

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 24, 2014 at 11:49 PM A lovely image in just two lines...well done, Sara! Hugs, Rhonda

Brenda Meier-Hans November 24, 2014 at 8:29 PM Lovely Sara. I love the picture number 3.

Jan Allison November 24, 2014 at 4:51 PM you have captured the image perfectly Sara:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx