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Crystalline Number Three

Attentive buck hears, not a cosset. 
The snow's last crackle at sunset.

Inspired by: Andrea Dietrich's contest Frozen In Crystalline
9 syllables line 1
8 syllables line 2

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2014

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James Fraser Date: 12/8/2014 1:27:00 PM Nice imagery Sara, love it, James :) Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/30/2014 3:10:00 PM Beautiful imagery, Sara! Congrats to you on an awesome win!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 11/30/2014 1:56:00 AM SARA, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/29/2014 9:59:00 PM wowoow! love that second line..! congratulations.. ! :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/29/2014 9:59:00 PM Hope you are better Sara.. :) God bless you more.. :)!

Sandra Haight Date: 11/29/2014 6:31:00 PM Hi Sara, congratulations on your win! Your words do paint the image so well! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/29/2014 1:25:00 PM perfect picture Sara congrats on win hugs Login to Reply

Earl Schumacker Date: 11/29/2014 12:27:00 PM Hi Sara, This is a uniquely interesting poem. Nice structure also. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/29/2014 12:25:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 11/29/2014 12:24:00 PM Lovely Sara...congrats to you Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/29/2014 9:26:00 AM I like this one Sara, congratulations. Login to Reply

Abdul Malik Date: 11/29/2014 8:43:00 AM Very nice. congrats. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/29/2014 6:28:00 AM Lovely write, Sarah, especially the second winning line! Congrats on your fine win. // paul Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/29/2014 6:17:00 AM Congrats on your win Sara Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/29/2014 1:25:00 AM Congrats on the win Sara,this indeed stands out...huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2014 1:00:00 AM gosh, sara, you made me go look up cosset in the dictionary. It was the second line that really got my attention. I loved that "last cackle" at sunset!!! congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/26/2014 3:11:00 AM great Sara I can see it standing there listening gl in contest hugs Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/25/2014 3:21:00 PM lovely crystalline, my friend Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/24/2014 11:49:00 PM A lovely image in just two lines...well done, Sara! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 8:29:00 PM Lovely Sara. I love the picture number 3. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/24/2014 4:51:00 PM you have captured the image perfectly Sara:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply