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Crystalline Number Three

Attentive buck hears, not a cosset. The snow's last crackle at sunset. Inspired by: Andrea Dietrich's contest Frozen In Crystalline 9 syllables line 1 8 syllables line 2

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James Fraser

Date: 12/8/2014 1:27:00 PM

Nice imagery Sara, love it, James :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/30/2014 3:10:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Sara! Congrats to you on an awesome win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:56:00 AM

SARA, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/29/2014 9:59:00 PM

wowoow! love that second line..! congratulations.. ! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/29/2014 9:59:00 PM

Hope you are better Sara.. :) God bless you more.. :)!

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/29/2014 6:31:00 PM

Hi Sara, congratulations on your win! Your words do paint the image so well! Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 1:25:00 PM

perfect picture Sara congrats on win hugs

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/29/2014 12:27:00 PM

Hi Sara, This is a uniquely interesting poem. Nice structure also. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:25:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 11/29/2014 12:24:00 PM

Lovely Sara...congrats to you

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2014 9:26:00 AM

I like this one Sara, congratulations.

Abdul Malik

Date: 11/29/2014 8:43:00 AM

Very nice. congrats.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 6:28:00 AM

Lovely write, Sarah, especially the second winning line! Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2014 6:17:00 AM

Congrats on your win Sara

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/29/2014 1:25:00 AM

Congrats on the win Sara,this indeed stands out...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 1:00:00 AM

gosh, sara, you made me go look up cosset in the dictionary. It was the second line that really got my attention. I loved that "last cackle" at sunset!!! congrats in my contest.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/26/2014 3:11:00 AM

great Sara I can see it standing there listening gl in contest hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 11/25/2014 3:21:00 PM

lovely crystalline, my friend

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/24/2014 11:49:00 PM

A lovely image in just two lines...well done, Sara! Hugs, Rhonda