Crystal Morning

Chantilly Lace upon the lawn, has welcomed sunrise in the dawn Diamond gems are freely scattered upon each bloom and garden flower Each pirouette is choreographed with tiny silver epitaphs The pitter-patter, of glistening leaves, sip the water from the eaves Translucent in the morning light, glittering rivulets, drip from spouts Crystal prisms, in rainbow hues, are tossed like sugar, from the dew Embellished by the ancient sun, shimmering rhinestones, one by one wash the face of every petal, and polish posies on a table Constellations on the grass, twinkling like a night of glass Then, slowly drying in the sun, and savoring the gold, as day begins Chantilly lace, in morning's sun, has gossamer wings to take it home Chantilly Lace upon the lawn, that welcomed sunrise, in the dawn has come and gone, without a sound But leaves a cheer to be recalled with fond affection, crystal clear
________________________________________ For Nette's Contest: "Metaphor...Crystal"..... Carrie Richards 2/12/14
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Ryerson Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 2:33 PM
Well Chystal-Chantilly-Carrie.... I see you have woven another beautiful tapestry of words here. Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order....
Gasun Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 6:42 AM
This is an outstanding piece my very dear fried Carrie. My hearty congratulations as well on your great win! Biggest hugs! love lots always, Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Congratulations. a poem that was very worthy of a win.
Mehta Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 11:10 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest of Crystal, carrie
Onclaud Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 2:11 PM
my, i really got glittering facets of morning from this piece, carrie...warm congrats on your stunning win in my contest!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 1:14 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in contest : CRYSTAL - A beautiful morning,Carrie ! (Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Walker  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on the win Carrie! Verlena
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 5:32 PM
wow, it dazzles just like crystal. this is right up nette's alley. I am sure she will love it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 6:50 PM
A beautiful title for an even more impressive poem Carrie. I see this beauty coming in as number ONE! I loved it. Your imagery was off the charts! Blessings
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