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Crystal Memories

Love's crystal memories from times that define When life was savored with a smoldering kiss Leaving blisters on our tongues from desired wine When dove wings fluttered in the shadow of dawn And we were hungry in the filtered light love looked upon From the moonlit rapture in night's eternal bliss When we gathered purple asters where our dreams entwine This jewel I keep in my soul as a shrine To your memory, my sad heart will reminisce The measure of life when we clung to its vine Until death whispered to you, and last breath was drawn And I saw my tomorrows as a trembling fawn Where loneliness became a guest I'll never dismiss Deep in my heart, you are forever enshrine 8/12/18/ contest Rhyme Time 6-Verses of Metaphors

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Date: 9/11/2018 6:00:00 AM
you never fail me! what great imagery throughout, beautiful rhythm and rhyme too. Loved this...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement...:)-luloo
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Date: 8/15/2018 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful one, Frederic. Such flair!
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Date: 8/13/2018 11:13:00 AM
Fredrick.. your beautifully creative love write is, among other things, captivating! Much enjoyed, Sir!
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Date: 8/12/2018 6:38:00 PM
the depth of your lines moves me, frederic... a poem sublime and poignant!...huggs
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Date: 8/12/2018 11:39:00 AM
This touched me so much. One of the best love poems I have read on the Soup. I just painted a greeting card with blue asters. The aster is the September birth flower. I'm signing off to read it again!
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Date: 8/12/2018 11:24:00 AM
Beautifully written, Frederic. I find myself pulled into this and lost in it , as I also can relate to what you express in this poem. I enjoy your poetry. Thanks for sharing :)
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