Crystal Fountain

I daze into your crystal vision
that special sparkle, the gleaming ride
encompassed by their calling stare
beyond the image to magic windows
                     where
I dare to break into their pools
with each splashing, caress the find
by diving deep-down 
into your mind

Yet, further do I seek to row
as I pleasingly paddle into thy soul
reaching, touching and taking in air
longingly leading me to an island
                 where
Suddenly pulled into your rivers heart-beat
daring to love you as the rapids speak
tossing and turning me round and round
nearing the end, as your tears fall-down

I'm finally sharing the emotional flow
from your crystal fountain eyes that glow
                  here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/22/2009 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Jack. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:14:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Jack! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:52:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 12:38:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 2:18:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/14/2009 6:34:00 PM
Good use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 12/14/2009 3:41:00 PM
congrats on being featured this week
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Date: 12/14/2009 11:37:00 AM
Jack - many congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Jack. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/30/2008 6:39:00 AM
Jack - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/4/2008 11:13:00 PM
Jack - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 8/25/2008 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations Jack on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations Jack, on "Crystal Fountain" being featured. Vince
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Date: 8/24/2008 7:39:00 PM
Jack - congrats on having your poem featured this week - I feel honored to be the first to read it - zI also find that rather sad
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