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Crystal Clear Sky

Like the light, you are pure. Like the weather, you are always changing. Like a bird, you a soaring up so high in that crystal clear sky, reaching to your biggest dreams, beyond everything and everyone’s reach except for your spectacular dreams. And now, you are lifting me towards my biggest dreams and letting me ride alongside with you in that crystal clear sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/17/2012 1:17:00 PM
I love this poem! So well written
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Date: 6/18/2012 5:44:00 PM
Hmm, I like it. Such imagery. I feel like I was in the sky when I read this. LOVED IT.
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:57:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Date: 5/30/2012 5:33:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mercedes. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2012 9:49:00 PM
wonderful to be able to ride along!!
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Date: 5/26/2012 9:46:00 PM
go get your biggest dream,fly Mercedes
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Date: 5/26/2012 9:12:00 PM
WONDERFUL POEM DEAR POET. I LOVE THE MESSAGE THAT STEMS THROUGHOUT THIS ONE!!!
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Date: 5/26/2012 9:02:00 PM
This is the poem i wrote. I have just recently registered and I am aiming to write 100 poems so that I can publish a poetry book. However, I am not editing these poems into paragraphs until I have finished all of my poems, thats just an fyi for everybody here and anybody who is wanting to read my poems that I will soon farther submit. Please comment and let me know what you think of it, restricting the inappropiate comments.
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