Crystal Clear

Cool spring water, have a drink
More refreshing, than you think
Clear like a crystal
Reflections of the moon light 
Dive right in, enjoy the night
Feel the water's call
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 10:57 AM
So, that is tail-rhyme! I love the title and the rhythm is very pleasant! Great write, Rick! Blessings, Hanitra
Lamoureux Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Hopefully I got it right and haven't led you down the wrong path.
Devnath  Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Nice thought worded nicely. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl
Horsman Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 8:00 AM
i've never done this form, Richard, this is again so inspiring, love the juxtapose,
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