Crystal Clear

I keep checking to see if your online....
it's funny how you've just disappeared.
I have the message now; it's crystal clear.
Months have come and gone,
since I last saw you.
What happened to you and me?
I'm just now beginning to see.
Who's at fault, I don't really care.
Because it's you who lost my dear.
My eyes are dry, no more tears,
emotions are gone, no more fears.
I want a genuine person to love me.
Someone who's not afraid to feel.
Months have come and gone,
still no word from you I see.
But it was I who was deceived
and the last words I heard you say,
you didn't want to hurt me.
How can this be....
when you broke my heart into
and burned in my brain images of you.
It's a pain that echoes still,
it's a void that will never be filled
and the image of you burned in my brain.
At times I thought I was insane.
Hoping that you'd call
or care to want to see me at all.
I keep checking to see if your online....
but you have disappeared.
The message is crystal clear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/4/2018 7:22:00 AM
This has a very sad undertone, but it's written almost cheerfully. I really like the paradoxical way you have written this poem, Donna. Nicely done!
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Donna Ahsinger
Date: 5/5/2018 9:51:00 PM
Thank you.... but nevertheless it was true.
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