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The picture changes to a serene painting of the sea Then the evening clouds of late autumn by the ocean There's a crystal blue lake followed by a lavender River and mountains and then nighttime stars by a Highway lit in neon/There is a city viewed from Miles away and lighted with the colors of dawn There is a green glow and a pinkish sunset and Always the ocean and a mountain with a man Pointing at the sky/The sun rises overland then Sets leaving a calming new morning Now there is a purple desert with twinkling stars And a moon just sinking in a new horizon and Clouds so thick you can almost taste them Like cotton candy and there's a dragon Sleeping on a desert floor with blue sand And a river in grey pass fertile soil and The clouds rolling in for the background And the dawn and the river go on forever

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Date: 3/28/2025 10:41:00 AM
Dear William, this is absolutely gorgeous and so well written with such descriptive imagery flowing in such a seamless manner! I really love the cadence and also how you’ve written “ And a moon just sinking in a new horizon and Clouds so thick you can almost taste them Like cotton candy and there's a dragon Sleeping on a desert floor with blue sand” how mystical and creative! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/29/2025 10:29:00 PM
I thank you for commenting/ The images were real, sort of, they were the background changing images on my laptop.
Date: 3/26/2025 2:23:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your colorful write. Great Ending. Have a blessed day............
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, the muse has left me in a state of Writer's Block I'm going to try writing something later tonight

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