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CRYSTAL BLUE LAKE

The picture changes to a serene painting of the sea
Then the evening clouds of late autumn by the ocean
There's a crystal blue lake followed by a lavender
River and mountains and then nighttime stars by a
Highway lit in neon/There is a city viewed from
Miles away and lighted with the colors of dawn
There is a green glow and a pinkish sunset and
Always the ocean and a mountain with a man
Pointing at the sky/The sun rises overland then
Sets leaving a calming new morning
Now there is a purple desert with twinkling stars
And a moon just sinking in a new horizon and
Clouds so thick you can almost taste them
Like cotton candy and there's a dragon
Sleeping on a desert floor with blue sand
And a river in grey pass fertile soil and
The clouds rolling in for the background
And the dawn and the river go on forever
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Empress Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Dear William, this is absolutely gorgeous and so well written with such descriptive imagery flowing in such a seamless manner! I really love the cadence and also how you’ve written “ And a moon just sinking in a new horizon and Clouds so thick you can almost taste them Like cotton candy and there's a dragon Sleeping on a desert floor with blue sand” how mystical and creative! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
HAYNES Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:29 PM
I thank you for commenting/ The images were real, sort of, they were the background changing images on my laptop.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 2:23 PM
I enjoyed reading your colorful write. Great Ending. Have a blessed day............
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 6:44 PM
Thank you, the muse has left me in a state of Writer's Block I'm going to try writing something later tonight
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