Ana Espinola Collins Poet Free verse

Crystal Ball

I chip fiercely
through the layers 
in search of my future
but nothing,
nothing at all,
just the reflexion
of my curiosity
and the certainty 
to focus
on the present 
or my future
will be nothing,
nothing at all
if I chip my time away.


by Ana Espinola Collins

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Carol Eastman May 27, 2014 at 10:47 AM Ahhh. so true... Well done piece. Ana Espinola Collins May 27, 2014 at 5:24 PM I appreciate your visit and comment :) Ana

Jessica Thompson May 27, 2014 at 12:26 AM Lovely Write Ana, I enjoyed the read. Take care Friend, Jess Ana Espinola Collins May 27, 2014 at 5:23 PM Thanks Jess for your comment and for visiting :) Ana

Richard Lamoureux May 26, 2014 at 8:30 AM I enjoyed the poem and all the great comments. Well done. Ana Espinola Collins May 26, 2014 at 8:37 PM Thanks Richard... Glad you enjoyed it :) Ana

Arthur Vaso May 24, 2014 at 8:40 PM Love this one, beautiful and philosophical Ana Espinola Collins May 24, 2014 at 10:44 PM Thanks Arthur and visiting :) Ana

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 12:30 PM Ana, thank you for the comment on my comment

Jan Allison May 22, 2014 at 2:17 AM Such a clever write Ana - I don't want to know whats in the future am having too much fun and never want it to stop. My poem while you see a chance take it means a lot - live each day to the full none of us know whats around the corner, hugs Jan xxx Ana Espinola Collins May 22, 2014 at 12:23 PM Thanks Jan and you're right about how we must enjoy each day because we never know what's ahead....thanks for visiting :) Ana

David Williams May 22, 2014 at 1:35 AM Ana I love this....David Ana Espinola Collins May 22, 2014 at 12:20 PM Thanks for commenting...Glad you liked it David :) Ana

Poet Destroyer A May 21, 2014 at 7:51 PM Ana, your poem, was stunning, time pausing, but stunning... WOW..about the NOTHING... i hear you, chipping away....Linda Ana Espinola Collins May 22, 2014 at 12:18 PM Thanks Linda for your kind words... Thanks for stopping by :) Ana

Vera Duggan May 21, 2014 at 7:37 PM Ana don't even think about looking into the future, why would you want to know what is ahead of you, just enjoy the moment that you are in and take care my friend..........Vera........... Ana Espinola Collins May 22, 2014 at 12:17 PM I completely agree with you Vera... Thanks for visiting :) Ana

Verlena S. Walker May 21, 2014 at 5:32 PM Hello Ana... This poem is very well written. I am enriched. Verlena Ana Espinola Collins May 21, 2014 at 7:23 PM Glad you liked it :)Ana

Paul Callus May 16, 2014 at 12:06 PM The future needs a good base to rest on...one that comes from past experience but most of all a solid present. So, it is best to make good use of time. Lovely write. // paul Ana Espinola Collins May 19, 2014 at 8:32 AM Thanks Paul :) Ana