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Crystal Ball

I chip fiercely through the layers in search of my future but nothing, nothing at all, just the reflexion of my curiosity and the certainty to focus on the present or my future will be nothing, nothing at all if I chip my time away. by Ana Espinola Collins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/27/2014 10:47:00 AM
Ahhh. so true... Well done piece.
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Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 5/27/2014 5:24:00 PM
I appreciate your visit and comment :) Ana
Date: 5/27/2014 12:26:00 AM
Lovely Write Ana, I enjoyed the read. Take care Friend, Jess
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Date: 5/27/2014 5:23:00 PM
Thanks Jess for your comment and for visiting :) Ana
Date: 5/26/2014 8:30:00 AM
I enjoyed the poem and all the great comments. Well done.
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Date: 5/26/2014 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Richard... Glad you enjoyed it :) Ana
Date: 5/24/2014 8:40:00 PM
Love this one, beautiful and philosophical
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Date: 5/24/2014 10:44:00 PM
Thanks Arthur and visiting :) Ana
Date: 5/22/2014 12:30:00 PM
Ana, thank you for the comment on my comment
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Date: 5/22/2014 2:17:00 AM
Such a clever write Ana - I don't want to know whats in the future am having too much fun and never want it to stop. My poem while you see a chance take it means a lot - live each day to the full none of us know whats around the corner, hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 5/22/2014 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan and you're right about how we must enjoy each day because we never know what's ahead....thanks for visiting :) Ana
Date: 5/22/2014 1:35:00 AM
Ana I love this....David
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Date: 5/22/2014 12:20:00 PM
Thanks for commenting...Glad you liked it David :) Ana
Date: 5/21/2014 7:51:00 PM
Ana, your poem, was stunning, time pausing, but stunning... WOW..about the NOTHING... i hear you, chipping away....Linda
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Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 5/22/2014 12:18:00 PM
Thanks Linda for your kind words... Thanks for stopping by :) Ana
Date: 5/21/2014 7:37:00 PM
Ana don't even think about looking into the future, why would you want to know what is ahead of you, just enjoy the moment that you are in and take care my friend..........Vera...........
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Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 5/22/2014 12:17:00 PM
I completely agree with you Vera... Thanks for visiting :) Ana
Date: 5/21/2014 5:32:00 PM
Hello Ana... This poem is very well written. I am enriched. Verlena
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Date: 5/21/2014 7:23:00 PM
Glad you liked it :)Ana
Date: 5/16/2014 12:06:00 PM
The future needs a good base to rest on...one that comes from past experience but most of all a solid present. So, it is best to make good use of time. Lovely write. // paul
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Date: 5/19/2014 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Paul :) Ana

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