Edward Hill Poet Rhyme

Crystal & Fernie

CRYSTAL AND FERNIE

I've searched and i've searched
for many years now and I still haven't a clue
I've dreamed and I've dreamed
night after night and still I wake up unhappy and blue

They were my life
A gift sent from up above
So why did she take them away from me
stealing all that I loved

Without them I have no reason to carry on
For my heart now bleeds with emptiness
All my loving is now gone

I hurt really bad now 
a feeling I can't explain
Still after all these painful lonily years now
she continues to drive me insane

My heart ripped out
drained of every drop of blood
She's asking me to give up MY children 
As if my life has now ended simply as it should...

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Mrs Rojas May 2, 2010 at 6:08 PM veryy nice

Destiny Orschell May 2, 2010 at 8:15 AM I hope you get to keep them Edward! It would tear me apart if that happened to me, but you gotta be strong. And don't give up on getting them back or keeping them. Great poem by the way. I feel your sorrow being put into it. Keep up the great work. Love Destiny