Crying Myself To Sleep

It's just one o'clock
On Sunday A.M.
And my thought process
Is getting quite slim
Eyelids are heavy,
Red colored, and rimmed.
Its now one-oh-two
On Sunday A.M.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 1, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Very cleverly done with smooth cadence and effective rhyming. Clock watching either leads to sleep because of the repetition, or to sleeplessness due to a busy mind! Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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