Daniel Cwiak Poet Couplet

Crying For It

I was going to script anything I had,

   To try so hard that it was not a, "Not Bad",


    And do a bit of a this kind of work,

    Oh, I got lost...what a dork!


    So, I shall nod if this won't win,

    I'll probably cry, and try again.

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Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2010 at 11:29 PM Great title for this creative way of doing Nikko's contest. Congrats! andrea

James Fraser July 2, 2010 at 11:20 AM Nice couplet Daniel, many congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown July 2, 2010 at 9:23 AM Congratulations Daniel on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol

Tirzah Conway July 2, 2010 at 8:53 AM Deffinately don't need to cry, Daniel, this is amazing! Congrat's on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~

July 2, 2010 at 8:29 AM No crying needed this time. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 2, 2010 at 8:19 AM Hi Daniel :)--I hope you're not crying--your in my winners' list--yay! Congrats for this --7th place is not bad at all ;) ---thanks for joining--nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 2, 2010 at 7:40 AM Congrats Dan on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this wonderful write and win without the letters m e an u as only Dan can do.. enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...at 4 a.m..

Poet Destroyer A June 27, 2010 at 11:16 PM Lol that's the spirit try, try, try till you succede lol... enjoyed your write..P.D.