Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

Cry Ye Fallen Angels

Cry ye fallen angels low your heads lay
Chasing sins of heartache with each new passing day
Angels decending,bring from above,
Echoes of mercy,whispers of love

Low you have fallen,dim shines your light
Decending to earth your wings burning in flight
Whispers of love shall be heard no more
Mercy but an echo where you once soared

Cry ye fallen angels a world of pain with each tear
Chasing sins of heartache for a creator we all fear
Angels decending,bring from above,
Echoes of mercy,whispers of love




Dan Kearley:2-16-12
Contest:Fallen Angels

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Elizabeth Wesley May 30, 2012 at 5:48 PM Really a special one Dan; the fallen angels are not talked about much but it is quite a story. You did a great write with this one!

The Situation March 5, 2012 at 8:15 PM serve in heaven or rule in hell. satan was given a place where we are as well. the circle of life revolves around the world. and thousands of souls died and rerose. not yet finding the escape. they just keep coming back, untill the end of the world.

Erica Gould February 22, 2012 at 12:38 PM Congratulations on your win! This is truely a brilliant piece.

Debbie Guzzi February 21, 2012 at 5:58 AM There ye go me bucko! fav line [Cry ye fallen angels low your heads lay] the repeated use of the word LOW in different places with different meaning is very skilled! Light & Love Debbie

Carol Sunshine Brown February 21, 2012 at 5:53 AM Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest *Dan*. Love, Carol

Matt Daniels February 20, 2012 at 10:54 AM This poem really reached out and took ahold of me, this is a piece of art.

Gwendolen Song February 20, 2012 at 9:59 AM Andrea is right in her comments below...I couldn't put words to describe why I liked this one so much....she hit the nail on the head! (Darn, she is brilliant!!) haha. Hope you are enjoying this poem's success, Dan. A big high five for you, bro.....Hey, how'd the roller skating poem do?...I really loved that one! I still am on a Moonlight Skate!! lol.

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2012 at 6:46 PM I love the way you did your entry, Dan. A very well deserved win. You did not romanticize the fallen angel nor define him cruelly. It was just the right amount of emotion. Congratulations on your win.

Sabina Nicole February 19, 2012 at 6:16 PM "Congrats" This was a well deserved 1 place win:)

Debbie Guzzi February 19, 2012 at 5:39 PM fallen angels is a hard subject could have been Lucifer aye? Soup mail Congrad's Light & Love

Christopher Bunton February 19, 2012 at 2:55 PM congratulations!

Dan Kearley February 19, 2012 at 2:50 PM Thank you all for your congrats on my poem. There were alot of great writes out there,I still can't believe it won? :o) Ha,ha Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2012 at 3:07 PM You have!!!!

Kash Poet February 19, 2012 at 11:29 AM Wonderful poem Dan.Congrats on your 1st place win.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 19, 2012 at 10:45 AM Congrats on your super win! Blessings, Rhonda

Samual Ronthorpe February 19, 2012 at 10:42 AM Dan, beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading this wonderful work. Congrats on winning 1st place in Tracie's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe

Deck Fitzgerald February 19, 2012 at 10:20 AM Congratulations Dan on this fine write , Declan ...

Carrie Richards February 19, 2012 at 8:34 AM Such a lovely and serene poem, Dan! A big congratulations!!

Dinda Minardi February 19, 2012 at 7:27 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win with this stunning number, Dan. Enjoyed this a lot. The poem keeps message to find out somehow. :)

Gwendolen Song February 19, 2012 at 6:57 AM Your poem has a song playing in its background of the old hymn book from my church...I love that this won first place, Dan. You took the picture from the contest and really demonstrated your writing craft well. A new fav for me! Congrats. You really earned this one. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 19, 2012 at 6:53 AM congrats Dan on a fantastic first place win for these emphatic words luv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 19, 2012 at 5:55 AM Congratulations Dan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2012 at 5:01 AM CONGRATTULATIONS DAN !!!!!THIS POEM GET THE FIRST PRICE IN THE CONTEST!!!! I AM SOOO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!! - F.E.F. - LOVE Anne-Lise :) :) :) :) :) :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2012 at 12:12 PM minus one : T... (so happy) :) :)

Sharon Ruebel February 18, 2012 at 11:59 AM Hello Dan, This is so very touching and beautiful! Full of passion with a little sadness all mixed in. Well done dear poet. Thank you my dear for your wonderful comments while visiting my poetry...Smiles, Shar

Cindy Lu February 17, 2012 at 7:25 AM AWWWWWWSSSOMMMME!!!!!!! Dan Kearley February 17, 2012 at 12:26 PM Thanks Cindy :o)

Kim Merryman February 16, 2012 at 6:26 PM I enjoyed reading your poem, Dan. Well done. Love, Kim Dan Kearley February 17, 2012 at 12:26 PM Thank you Kim :o)

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