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Cry Ye Fallen Angels

Cry ye fallen angels low your heads lay
Chasing sins of heartache with each new passing day
Angels decending,bring from above,
Echoes of mercy,whispers of love

Low you have fallen,dim shines your light
Decending to earth your wings burning in flight
Whispers of love shall be heard no more
Mercy but an echo where you once soared

Cry ye fallen angels a world of pain with each tear
Chasing sins of heartache for a creator we all fear
Angels decending,bring from above,
Echoes of mercy,whispers of love




Dan Kearley:2-16-12
Contest:Fallen Angels

Copyright © Dan Kearley | Year Posted 2012

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Elizabeth Wesley Date: 5/30/2012 5:48:00 PM Really a special one Dan; the fallen angels are not talked about much but it is quite a story. You did a great write with this one! Login to Reply

The Situation Date: 3/5/2012 8:15:00 PM serve in heaven or rule in hell. satan was given a place where we are as well. the circle of life revolves around the world. and thousands of souls died and rerose. not yet finding the escape. they just keep coming back, untill the end of the world. Login to Reply

Erica Gould Date: 2/22/2012 12:38:00 PM Congratulations on your win! This is truely a brilliant piece. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/21/2012 5:58:00 AM There ye go me bucko! fav line [Cry ye fallen angels low your heads lay] the repeated use of the word LOW in different places with different meaning is very skilled! Light & Love Debbie Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/21/2012 5:53:00 AM Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest *Dan*. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Matt Daniels Date: 2/20/2012 10:54:00 AM This poem really reached out and took ahold of me, this is a piece of art. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 2/20/2012 9:59:00 AM Andrea is right in her comments below...I couldn't put words to describe why I liked this one so much....she hit the nail on the head! (Darn, she is brilliant!!) haha. Hope you are enjoying this poem's success, Dan. A big high five for you, bro.....Hey, how'd the roller skating poem do?...I really loved that one! I still am on a Moonlight Skate!! lol. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/19/2012 6:46:00 PM I love the way you did your entry, Dan. A very well deserved win. You did not romanticize the fallen angel nor define him cruelly. It was just the right amount of emotion. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Sabina Nicole Date: 2/19/2012 6:16:00 PM "Congrats" This was a well deserved 1 place win:) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/19/2012 5:39:00 PM fallen angels is a hard subject could have been Lucifer aye? Soup mail Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Christopher Bunton Date: 2/19/2012 2:55:00 PM congratulations! Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 2/19/2012 2:50:00 PM Thank you all for your congrats on my poem. There were alot of great writes out there,I still can't believe it won? :o) Ha,ha Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2012 3:07:00 PM You have!!!!

Kash Poet Date: 2/19/2012 11:29:00 AM Wonderful poem Dan.Congrats on your 1st place win. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/19/2012 10:45:00 AM Congrats on your super win! Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/19/2012 10:42:00 AM Dan, beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading this wonderful work. Congrats on winning 1st place in Tracie's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe Login to Reply

Deck Fitzgerald Date: 2/19/2012 10:20:00 AM Congratulations Dan on this fine write , Declan ... Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 2/19/2012 8:34:00 AM Such a lovely and serene poem, Dan! A big congratulations!! Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 2/19/2012 7:27:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win with this stunning number, Dan. Enjoyed this a lot. The poem keeps message to find out somehow. :) Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 2/19/2012 6:57:00 AM Your poem has a song playing in its background of the old hymn book from my church...I love that this won first place, Dan. You took the picture from the contest and really demonstrated your writing craft well. A new fav for me! Congrats. You really earned this one. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/19/2012 6:53:00 AM congrats Dan on a fantastic first place win for these emphatic words luv.. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/19/2012 5:55:00 AM Congratulations Dan xx Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2012 5:01:00 AM CONGRATTULATIONS DAN !!!!!THIS POEM GET THE FIRST PRICE IN THE CONTEST!!!! I AM SOOO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!! - F.E.F. - LOVE Anne-Lise :) :) :) :) :) :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2012 12:12:00 PM minus one : T... (so happy) :) :)

Sharon Ruebel Date: 2/18/2012 11:59:00 AM Hello Dan, This is so very touching and beautiful! Full of passion with a little sadness all mixed in. Well done dear poet. Thank you my dear for your wonderful comments while visiting my poetry...Smiles, Shar Login to Reply

Cindy Lu Date: 2/17/2012 7:25:00 AM AWWWWWWSSSOMMMME!!!!!!! Login to Reply Dan Kearley Date: 2/17/2012 12:26:00 PM Thanks Cindy :o)

Kim Merryman Date: 2/16/2012 6:26:00 PM I enjoyed reading your poem, Dan. Well done. Love, Kim Login to Reply Dan Kearley Date: 2/17/2012 12:26:00 PM Thank you Kim :o)

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