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Cry Ye Fallen Angels

Cry ye fallen angels low your heads lay Chasing sins of heartache with each new passing day Angels decending,bring from above, Echoes of mercy,whispers of love Low you have fallen,dim shines your light Decending to earth your wings burning in flight Whispers of love shall be heard no more Mercy but an echo where you once soared Cry ye fallen angels a world of pain with each tear Chasing sins of heartache for a creator we all fear Angels decending,bring from above, Echoes of mercy,whispers of love Dan Kearley:2-16-12 Contest:Fallen Angels

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/30/2012 5:48:00 PM

Really a special one Dan; the fallen angels are not talked about much but it is quite a story. You did a great write with this one!

The Situation

Date: 3/5/2012 8:15:00 PM

serve in heaven or rule in hell. satan was given a place where we are as well. the circle of life revolves around the world. and thousands of souls died and rerose. not yet finding the escape. they just keep coming back, untill the end of the world.

Erica Gould

Date: 2/22/2012 12:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! This is truely a brilliant piece.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/21/2012 5:58:00 AM

There ye go me bucko! fav line [Cry ye fallen angels low your heads lay] the repeated use of the word LOW in different places with different meaning is very skilled! Light & Love Debbie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 5:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest *Dan*. Love, Carol

Matt Daniels

Date: 2/20/2012 10:54:00 AM

This poem really reached out and took ahold of me, this is a piece of art.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/20/2012 9:59:00 AM

Andrea is right in her comments below...I couldn't put words to describe why I liked this one so much....she hit the nail on the head! (Darn, she is brilliant!!) haha. Hope you are enjoying this poem's success, Dan. A big high five for you, bro.....Hey, how'd the roller skating poem do?...I really loved that one! I still am on a Moonlight Skate!! lol.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2012 6:46:00 PM

I love the way you did your entry, Dan. A very well deserved win. You did not romanticize the fallen angel nor define him cruelly. It was just the right amount of emotion. Congratulations on your win.

Sabina Nicole

Date: 2/19/2012 6:16:00 PM

"Congrats" This was a well deserved 1 place win:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/19/2012 5:39:00 PM

fallen angels is a hard subject could have been Lucifer aye? Soup mail Congrad's Light & Love

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/19/2012 2:55:00 PM

congratulations!

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/19/2012 2:50:00 PM

Thank you all for your congrats on my poem. There were alot of great writes out there,I still can't believe it won? :o) Ha,ha

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2012 3:07:00 PM

You have!!!!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/19/2012 11:29:00 AM

Wonderful poem Dan.Congrats on your 1st place win.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/19/2012 10:45:00 AM

Congrats on your super win! Blessings, Rhonda

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/19/2012 10:42:00 AM

Dan, beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading this wonderful work. Congrats on winning 1st place in Tracie's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 2/19/2012 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations Dan on this fine write , Declan ...

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/19/2012 8:34:00 AM

Such a lovely and serene poem, Dan! A big congratulations!!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/19/2012 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win with this stunning number, Dan. Enjoyed this a lot. The poem keeps message to find out somehow. :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/19/2012 6:57:00 AM

Your poem has a song playing in its background of the old hymn book from my church...I love that this won first place, Dan. You took the picture from the contest and really demonstrated your writing craft well. A new fav for me! Congrats. You really earned this one. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2012 6:53:00 AM

congrats Dan on a fantastic first place win for these emphatic words luv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/19/2012 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations Dan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2012 5:01:00 AM

CONGRATTULATIONS DAN !!!!!THIS POEM GET THE FIRST PRICE IN THE CONTEST!!!! I AM SOOO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!! - F.E.F. - LOVE Anne-Lise :) :) :) :) :) :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2012 12:12:00 PM

minus one : T... (so happy) :) :)

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/18/2012 11:59:00 AM

Hello Dan, This is so very touching and beautiful! Full of passion with a little sadness all mixed in. Well done dear poet. Thank you my dear for your wonderful comments while visiting my poetry...Smiles, Shar

Cindy Lu

Date: 2/17/2012 7:25:00 AM

AWWWWWWSSSOMMMME!!!!!!!

Dan Kearley
Date: 2/17/2012 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Cindy :o)

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/16/2012 6:26:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem, Dan. Well done. Love, Kim

Dan Kearley
Date: 2/17/2012 12:26:00 PM

Thank you Kim :o)