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Cry of the Whippoorwill

The mist seems to be covering the cool water this morning Just like my grandmother's quilt lying across her feather bed The sun is breaking dawn, on the horizon brightly shining As I hear the last cry of a whippoorwill and wonder what it said The nighttime creatures have found their place for sleeping In their burrows and on highest branches, some now are perching The daytime comes alive with the sounds of all of those Who simply prefer life in sunshine I suppose The faint light of the stars turns into sunrise golden hue Then the sky above goes from darkness to pale blue The mist disappears as though it had never been Perhaps just being absorbed back to where last night it began The trees gently wave as if to say hello to a new day White clouds roll across the sky in an entertaining way Making pictures as they go for all who take the time to see What to make of each is up to you and me Now the sun starts sinking as the breeze begins to still I can see the moon peeking over the far distant hill I once again hear the lonely cry of a single whippoorwill The mist re-appears and with stars the night sky does fill ©Donna Jones

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Date: 11/2/2013 11:55:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 3/24/2013 4:18:00 PM
this is a really pretty one down here that I am finally seeing. I really like this one! WAs it inspired by any contest, or did you get inspired by your own part of the world?
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/24/2013 5:07:00 PM
Thanks Andrea...just one I pulled out of an old notebook of long ago....Donna...thanks for reading....
Date: 2/8/2013 6:19:00 PM
Oh, I love the way you put this together Donna,, very nice ;}
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/8/2013 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Debbie. Glad you enjoyed reading my poem....blessings always....
Date: 2/2/2013 4:03:00 PM
Donna, you have a neat sense of perception. We are so lucky to have this (and you) to bring the beauty home. Thank-you also for your comment. You are wise!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2013 4:34:00 PM
Thank you for the welcome and very kind comments. As for wise, I've had my share of mistakes but we just keep on tryin' right? Blessings new friend
Date: 2/2/2013 1:49:00 PM
Beautiful words in your poem Donna. - Pleasant to read - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2013 2:36:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed. You have a wonderful one yourself. Peaceful and sunny I hope.
Date: 2/2/2013 1:23:00 PM
This is a purely beautiful and wonderful write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2013 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Russell, it's truly amazing to observe nature day in and day out like I have been fortunate enough to do in the country all my life. Your kind words make me smile.

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