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I have found my refuge in the arms of death Take away this soul the life I used to have To live in darkness in the middle of nowhere Standing in adversity with noone to hold me This grief I felt has tortured my brain Great deal of misfortune to carry this burden.. ~Chrisna Vergara

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Date: 2/23/2018 12:10:00 PM
hi christina you have the harsh reality of death very well. there is one poetic verse from unknow Urdu poet who writes about a soldier died in the way of defending his land.this is a wish of the soldier " why not i sleep clinging with you ,Oh Grave i have got you after giving up my soul and breath."
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Date: 5/30/2017 4:05:00 AM
My heart is breaking. I can feel the incredible sadness and the deep void felt in these words. A great job, Chrisna!
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Date: 5/28/2017 8:52:00 PM
Oh..this is a sad poem. I felt the sadness as I was reading it.
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Date: 5/20/2017 3:17:00 PM
Hand your burdens over to God and enjoy each moment he gives us. Great first write on PS Chrisna.
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Date: 5/20/2017 11:28:00 AM
Very beautifully written, you ve choose your words carefully and written them beautifully, I really like it however I m new on this site and will really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Chrisna Vergara
Date: 5/20/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thank you so much for visiting my page. I would love to read your poems! Regards! :)
Date: 5/19/2017 8:16:00 AM
Ooh this is a bleak write. Nice words, and well penned, but bleak.
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Chrisna Vergara
Date: 5/20/2017 11:24:00 AM
Yes, most of my poems seem to go in that direction.. :p I appreciate your comment Scott! Have a nice day! :)
Date: 5/19/2017 12:12:00 AM
I loved the concepts .the imagery is unique. Rate me also im new to soup
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Chrisna Vergara
Date: 5/20/2017 11:24:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 4/30/2017 4:33:00 PM
Hello
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Chrisna Vergara
Date: 5/1/2017 6:55:00 AM
Hi.
Date: 4/30/2017 1:21:00 PM
Nice Write !! I believe that a tortured soul is one that hasn't forgiven itself or hasn't learned to Love itself.. Best wishes :)
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Chrisna Vergara
Date: 5/1/2017 6:54:00 AM
Thank you! :)