Chrisna Vergara Poet Free verse

Cry For Help

I have found my refuge
in the arms of death
Take away this soul
the life I used to have
To live in darkness
in the middle of nowhere
Standing in adversity
with noone to hold me
This grief I felt
has tortured my brain
Great deal of misfortune
to carry this burden..


~Chrisna Vergara

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Muhammad Imtiaz February 23, 2018 at 12:10 PM hi christina you have the harsh reality of death very well. there is one poetic verse from unknow Urdu poet who writes about a soldier died in the way of defending his land.this is a wish of the soldier " why not i sleep clinging with you ,Oh Grave i have got you after giving up my soul and breath."

Lesa Rodden May 30, 2017 at 4:05 AM My heart is breaking. I can feel the incredible sadness and the deep void felt in these words. A great job, Chrisna!

Darlene De Beaulieu May 28, 2017 at 8:52 PM Oh..this is a sad poem. I felt the sadness as I was reading it.

Elizabeth Kinch May 20, 2017 at 3:17 PM Hand your burdens over to God and enjoy each moment he gives us. Great first write on PS Chrisna.

Faraz Ajmal May 20, 2017 at 11:28 AM Very beautifully written, you ve choose your words carefully and written them beautifully, I really like it however I m new on this site and will really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them Chrisna Vergara May 20, 2017 at 11:43 AM Thank you so much for visiting my page. I would love to read your poems! Regards! :)

Scott Thirtyseven May 19, 2017 at 8:16 AM Ooh this is a bleak write. Nice words, and well penned, but bleak. Chrisna Vergara May 20, 2017 at 11:24 AM Yes, most of my poems seem to go in that direction.. :p I appreciate your comment Scott! Have a nice day! :)

Bawa Talwar May 19, 2017 at 12:12 AM I loved the concepts .the imagery is unique. Rate me also im new to soup Chrisna Vergara May 20, 2017 at 11:24 AM Thank you! :)

John Beam April 30, 2017 at 4:33 PM Hello Chrisna Vergara May 1, 2017 at 6:55 AM Hi.

Glen Schwartz April 30, 2017 at 1:21 PM Nice Write !! I believe that a tortured soul is one that hasn't forgiven itself or hasn't learned to Love itself.. Best wishes :) Chrisna Vergara May 1, 2017 at 6:54 AM Thank you! :)