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Cry For Help

I have found my refuge in the arms of death Take away this soul the life I used to have To live in darkness in the middle of nowhere Standing in adversity with noone to hold me This grief I felt has tortured my brain Great deal of misfortune to carry this burden.. ~Chrisna Vergara

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 2/23/2018 12:10:00 PM

hi christina you have the harsh reality of death very well. there is one poetic verse from unknow Urdu poet who writes about a soldier died in the way of defending his land.this is a wish of the soldier " why not i sleep clinging with you ,Oh Grave i have got you after giving up my soul and breath."

Lesa Rodden

Date: 5/30/2017 4:05:00 AM

My heart is breaking. I can feel the incredible sadness and the deep void felt in these words. A great job, Chrisna!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/28/2017 8:52:00 PM

Oh..this is a sad poem. I felt the sadness as I was reading it.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/20/2017 3:17:00 PM

Hand your burdens over to God and enjoy each moment he gives us. Great first write on PS Chrisna.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 5/20/2017 11:28:00 AM

Very beautifully written, you ve choose your words carefully and written them beautifully, I really like it however I m new on this site and will really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Chrisna Vergara
Date: 5/20/2017 11:43:00 AM