Cry For Help

Scared palms sweat hands shaking Look for an out. Mind goes blank, eyes dart all over the place. Blood pressure rises you start turning pale. Feeling restless stomach hurts head ache nap!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/21/2011 1:55:00 PM

This really is well-structured, Cory, and I like the emotion it conveys strongly. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/21/2011 5:15:00 AM

wonderful cory.. a great synopsis of how this scared feeling takes over and infiltrates.. time for a nap ..always..luv.. wonderful words..my friend.. so cool...

Nick Bagnall

Date: 6/21/2011 4:46:00 AM

nicely structured, interesting topic, nice write.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/21/2011 3:33:00 AM

Interesting one..Good luck if for the contest..Thanks for faithfully stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2011 11:52:00 PM

HI, Cory, the shape this formatting gave your poem is pretty cool . Did you see it? WAs this for the emoting contest. Yes,I could feel that cry for help. Good luck in the contest!