Cory Long Poet Tetractys

Cry For Help

Scared
palms sweat
hands shaking
Look for an out.
Mind goes blank, eyes dart all over the place.
Blood pressure rises  you start turning pale.
Feeling restless
stomach hurts
head ache
nap!

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Carolyn Devonshire June 21, 2011 at 1:55 PM This really is well-structured, Cory, and I like the emotion it conveys strongly. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 21, 2011 at 5:15 AM wonderful cory.. a great synopsis of how this scared feeling takes over and infiltrates.. time for a nap ..always..luv.. wonderful words..my friend.. so cool...

Nick Bagnall June 21, 2011 at 4:46 AM nicely structured, interesting topic, nice write.

Sara Kendrick June 21, 2011 at 3:33 AM Interesting one..Good luck if for the contest..Thanks for faithfully stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2011 at 11:52 PM HI, Cory, the shape this formatting gave your poem is pretty cool . Did you see it? WAs this for the emoting contest. Yes,I could feel that cry for help. Good luck in the contest!