Cry Baby

Vague are the memories of my very early years
Most occurrences I know of are by second hand
A chubby, round, baby with large brown eyes
So chuck full of "dimples", that the nickname stuck
At birth, I sucked on one finger, and then it was two!  
I cried a whole lot, they tell me, much more often than not
These habits, became daily rituals that drove Mama up the wall!
In hind sight, just maybe, I didn’t want to be "here"
Somehow, my Papa understood me well
And found ways to bring out in me, giggles, coos and smiles
He calmed me with silly, elaborate and impromptu songs
It seemed I'd listened intently, and very often fall asleep
As I reached my toddler years, questions and the mischiefs flourished 
Curiosity ruled my days, and the constant crying stopped
But sucking on two fingers must have comforted me somehow
‘Though threats to “cut it off”, became the norm 
It was soon realized by all, how useless they became
And revealed to my family, how stubborn I would be,
Through all the noise and alarm, I know that I was loved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Al-Khalili Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 12:18 AM
I was a big cry baby when I was younger. Memories of my sister holding my hand whenever I was down. You've made me remember the moments I thought were gone. Guess they aren't! Wow. Love, Sami.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 9:08 PM
Its almost lunch time here.. got to get my groom and go do some sight seeing..luv.. good to hear from my BBF.. withluv from Italia ..ciao.
Chachere Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 5:16 PM
thats so cute, chubby & round!(: reminds me of my sister, Erin. she's very stubborn and used to cry all the time when she was a baby, but shes sweet.sometimes. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 11:28 AM
A very enjoyable read Audrey. Wishing you the best in Catie's contest should you enter it. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 4:01 AM
Very interesting poem, I enjoyed it, Audrey
Richards Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:24 PM
What a lovely poem filled with memories that go way back when being loved was all that mattered! Perfect way to start one's young life! :) Sweet poem!!
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:23 PM
Very interesting write. enjoyed it. Audrey
Devonshire Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Too bad you don't remember all these times. They would have made it easier to cope when raising your own, Dimples. My family swears I never cried as a baby. But that seems odd, doesn't it? That's what babies do best and most! Enjoyed getting to know you as a little one, dear. Love, Carolyn
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August 16, 2010 at 2:36 PM
LOVELY POEM,Sweet and cute. .Celene
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Very adorable write Audrey my BBF good luck in the contest.. my entry is CONGRATULATIONS! It's A Girl".. haha..and it was.. luv.. enjoy your day with blessings and luv..caio..
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