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Cry

If you just sleep, the rats will only cover your eyes. How dare you dream!!!!! wanting a way out. this bad dream is more real than love. doubt more sensual then the delicate evasion of a kiss. there's not enough sweetness to cover this filthy taste. it loves me it's everything of nothing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/30/2010 4:34:00 PM
Very strong write evoking both beauty and ugliness..if I might suggest, it would be stronger without all the double spacing. Light & Love & welcome to the soup!
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