Melani Udaeta Poet Rhyme

Crushing

Hey boy, I’m crushing on you;
Why is that so hard to admit to?

You once said you were under my skin,
I guess it’s time to tell you I’ve fallen;

I hear your voice when I’m all alone 
2 am wanting to grab you through the phone; 

Wishing I could roll over and get a hug,
when I’m with you it’s never enough;

All night long, silently calling your name,
my heart my dreams have no shame;

Looking in your eyes is a punch in the gut,
ambivalence is a painful choke up; 

I was wrong to look backward at a fire
When I see you? Pure desire.

Hey boy, I can’t stop crushing on you;
You knock the wind out of me
when you walk in the room.

Contest: I’m Crushing on You
Date: 4/7/19
Sponsor:  Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Ralph Sergi April 12, 2019 at 6:56 PM Hi Melania: A beautiful amorous message to her lover. Well Done. BE SURE AND PUT THE NAME OF THE POST, THE SPONSOR AND THE DATE OR IT WILL NOT BE ACCEPTED IF IT IS A CONTEST Melani Udaeta April 13, 2019 at 12:27 AM Thanks for the heads up. Done. :)

Paul E. Lake April 10, 2019 at 8:58 AM Ms. Udaeta, I really love your poems. There so here now with a gritty flavor of truth and the harshness of life, and joys of love. The power, hurt and confusion to be found in love, a broken heart is like a universe losing its sun. your expression is grace and beauty. looking forward to reading much more of your amazing talent. Thank you. Paul