Kristina Whitmore Poet Couplet

Crushed

Fragile are crisp clean lines that edge an invisible thread
Carelessly crushed beneath the unknown forceful dead

Efforts of gripping the reality through truthful grief pained wash
Casual condolences lessened love communicated instant message loss

Reversal to rewind wheels spinning overtime must stop
Cursed hearted minds bottomless drift into a despaired rot

Treads that slip tears away from the wearing of a long road
Finding courage to carry on strength caring for our body our home

Gathered senses speaking sparingly to form any reason after death
Momentous is the rationality that wildly spreads a laid to rest


'Any Couplet written in October-November' Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo

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Freddie Robinson Jr. November 28, 2017 at 7:59 PM Consciousness elevating poetry, Kristina. Much depth of thought are your existential expressions. As is given above, so is received below. Your pen wisdom excels exceedingly. Celestial musings of star bright thoughts. Love and more love always.

Silent One November 28, 2017 at 2:58 PM You described it very poetically.. However an unpleasant emotion.. Kristina Whitmore November 28, 2017 at 5:12 PM Thanks for stopping by and commenting. This one I wrote for the couplet contest and found myself on the subject of preventing loss through accidents. Unintentional until re-read which is what I truly love about my poetry. Hope you are doing well! Kristina Whitmore November 28, 2017 at 5:12 PM Thanks for stopping by and commenting. This one I wrote for the couplet contest and found myself on the subject of preventing loss through accidents. Unintentional until re-read which is what I truly love about my poetry. Hope you are doing well!