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Crushed

Petals falling from unseeded bud opened by a midnight sun sparkling it to love then vanishing to return on its course in candle lights stolen star to star unmindful of ice pellets tearing at the calyx teardrops frozen in the throat lacerating heart throbbing to harden like winter in silence. February weeps meet a new face lights start dancing in the eyes glances caressing two hearts whispering to each other sweetness crushed grape turns to wine tinting two goblets crimson! Eternal seed buds new life flame of God's everlasting light running through veins of two hearts saying to each other: Yes I love you

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Date: 12/7/2024 5:40:00 PM
What a lovely write enjoyed reading your poem many blessings
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Date: 10/14/2024 11:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your well crafted and beautifully flowing free verse Frances. It's clever in its composition, metaphors and imagery - and deserving of so many more complimentary comments other than mine. Cheers - Gary
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Gary Radice
Date: 10/15/2024 8:35:00 AM
I'm not surprised it won a gold trophy. :) Congratulations! Cheers - Gary
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Frances Schiavina
Date: 10/15/2024 7:49:00 AM
Gary Sorry for the confusion. This poem is listed twice and won the gold trophy. Your kind comment is greatly appreciated! Frances

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