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Crushed Premiere Contest Winner

Petals falling 
from unseeded bud
opened by midnight sun
sparkling it to love 
then leaving 
to return on its course
dressed in candle lights
stolen star to star
unmindful
of ice pellets 
tearing at the calyx
teardrops 
frozen in the throat
lacerating heart 
throbbing to harden 
like winter in silence.
February weeps
meet a new face
lights start dancing 
in the eyes 
glances caressing 
two hearts
whispering to each other 
sweetness
crushed grape 
turns to wine
tinting two goblets 
crimson!
Eternal seed 
buds new life 
flame of God's
everlasting light
running through veins 
of two hearts 
saying to each other: Yes 
I love you

First Place Winner: Brian Strand-Podium-1/11/21
Eighth Place- Anthony Bianco-Crushed-6/18/20
Seventh Place: Brian Strand-Late July-7/20/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/13/2024 9:31:00 AM
Wonderful imagery! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:44:00 PM
A beautiful ending for a broken heart.
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Date: 6/18/2020 5:41:00 AM
This is such a beautiful and different take on the theme Frances. Gorgeously penned. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/18/2020 4:41:00 AM
Frances, A romantic take on 'crushed'. Nice to see among others filled with tragic muses. Congrats.Mohan
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Date: 5/23/2020 9:37:00 PM
Touching poem. Great title for it.
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Date: 7/27/2018 9:44:00 AM
Excellent poetry filled with imagery. I see as well that congrats are in order. Well done.
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Date: 7/22/2018 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful imagery. Well done!
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Date: 7/21/2018 7:21:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win Frances.
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Date: 7/21/2018 5:51:00 AM
Lovely imagery! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/21/2018 5:35:00 AM
Lovely poem, Frances. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/20/2018 4:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem--enjoyed the sights and sounds, Frances.
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