Crush - Tanka

words die in my palm
as my eyelids caress them...
frozen seconds mourn...
my soul is drawing answers
out of broken mirrors shards...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 8, 2010 at 6:47 AM
A wonderful thought conveyed by great images, Liliana
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June 8, 2010 at 3:07 AM
strong use of words got a handful with your imagery. Enjoyed have a nice one,..p.d.
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