Crush Rebuild

I think I have a crush because I 
never felt such a rush,
Time and time I been let down, I 
always found myself on the 
rebound,
My life has been a living hell but 
when I saw you my crush rebuild,
My life has changed drastically But 
because of you I feel complete,
When you kiss my lips their so soft 
and sweet, when you hold me I can’t 
retreat,

I know we don’t know each other 
that much but hey it’s just a crush;
I know there’s thing that are 
blocking the way but believe in me 
an the crush we change, I kind of 
know the way you feel but time will 
tell I just know it will,
I don’t know does that make me 
sound cheap to have a crush on a 
one way street, trying to 
make this a two way thing,

I often close my eyes and image 
that everything right but time flies 
by and leave me paralyzed,
Thinking of this crush I have on you 
hoping that someday I can make it 
true I'm always come 
back to the crush you made because 
that’s the day my life was remade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 30, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Wishful thinking well written
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November 24, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Vontae. Love, Carol
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November 22, 2010 at 11:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Vontae. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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November 21, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its very creative theme.. hope your time on Soup is fun.. enjoy a very Happy Thanksgiving with luv..
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