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Crush Rebuild

I think I have a crush because I never felt such a rush, Time and time I been let down, I always found myself on the rebound, My life has been a living hell but when I saw you my crush rebuild, My life has changed drastically But because of you I feel complete, When you kiss my lips their so soft and sweet, when you hold me I can’t retreat, I know we don’t know each other that much but hey it’s just a crush; I know there’s thing that are blocking the way but believe in me an the crush we change, I kind of know the way you feel but time will tell I just know it will, I don’t know does that make me sound cheap to have a crush on a one way street, trying to make this a two way thing, I often close my eyes and image that everything right but time flies by and leave me paralyzed, Thinking of this crush I have on you hoping that someday I can make it true I'm always come back to the crush you made because that’s the day my life was remade.

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Date: 11/30/2010 10:20:00 AM
Wishful thinking well written
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Date: 11/24/2010 10:46:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Vontae. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:00:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Vontae. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its very creative theme.. hope your time on Soup is fun.. enjoy a very Happy Thanksgiving with luv..
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