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Crush On You

Sometimes I will be standing there and your face will flash before my eyes, a face that I want to touch until it's diminished into the size of a small keyhole like the one that's on the lock to your heart the smell of your body will float beneath my nose until I'm lost in a memory of our lips becoming one Although the images we created during special times are etched forever in special caverns of our minds as I look upon your face, I see the mirror of our past as I look into your eyes, I see our history unfold in irises as I run my hand through your hair, I watch the sun reflect as I look upon your face, I see a vision of our future

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Date: 6/28/2022 2:31:00 AM
Some lovely ways of talking of our having crushes on people. We've all had one - or two or three or whatever - and it's nice to see such discussed, to see a face flashing before our eyes, bringing a mirror of our past, the unfolding of history. Yes, thanks, FN. I liked this one.
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Date: 6/27/2022 5:50:00 PM
ahhh the limn of romance if there ever was a time for it now the world needs more of the likes of this...well done, nice capture of the heart's intent
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Date: 6/27/2022 2:06:00 PM
Well done, Floyd. Keep it up.
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Date: 4/12/2022 7:29:00 AM
beautiful write!enjoyed reading your poem.
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