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Crush

over contemplation nervous stimulation shaky approach rehearsed jokes careful walk toward him small talk, thoughts dim magnetic pull eyes twinkle lips full breaths blend eyes connect timidity projects little blush hush, hush awkward giggles little hints dressed in riddles thumbs twiddle eyes look down shyly hearts pound loudly smiles are heard perched like love birds mouths parched of words subtle teases moment freezes displeased to leave afraid to stay nothing to say adoration reflects what next? 10-18-2013

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Date: 12/30/2013 9:26:00 AM
You are a very good poet Juliet, I love to read your poetry. This one is very good....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 11/15/2013 4:59:00 PM
Words of sweetness and love. The reader can feel the hesitation of approaching this crush. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment on my Country Craziness poem
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Date: 10/26/2013 11:45:00 AM
a nice little thought... I still recall my first crush... enjoyed..LINDA
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Date: 10/24/2013 4:04:00 AM
sweet beautiful piece
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Date: 10/23/2013 7:09:00 AM
- Yes, CUTE !!! - Well done Juliet ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2013 12:25:00 AM
I sensed a lot of momentary pauses in each hesitant, yet expressive line. This very much mimics how a real "crush" feels. Awesome job!
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:14:00 AM
Juliet this is a very well thought out piece of work, I like the journey it takes the reader on, well done...David
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:39:00 PM
wow, you really spelled it all out. that first big crush and so shy. I love this.
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