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The day i first met her She moved along like a timed slide show With grace and chaste in her stride Swinging her hips like a desert Carmel And stepping on the ground like it hurts. That’s when i first saw her. Meeting her was a dream come true, Speaking to her was like melting the snow. Her voice like the ocean singing low With no turbulent waves to alter the flow. That’s when i first met her. Touching her was like food to a pauper Her skin smooth like a silk wall Her body soft like sheep wool That’s when i first touched her. Holding her in my arms, Being with her all my life ...was never imagined For it never happened

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/12/2012 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Louis. Love, Carol
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Louis Muhereza
Date: 3/15/2012 4:21:00 AM
THANKS Carol.....am honored. louis
Date: 1/30/2012 5:47:00 AM
Lovely poem you written Louis. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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