Crush

The day i first met her 
She moved along like a timed slide show
With grace and chaste in her stride 
Swinging her hips like a desert Carmel 
And stepping on the ground like it hurts.

That’s when i first saw her.

Meeting her was a dream come true,
Speaking to her was like melting the snow.
Her voice like the ocean singing low
With no turbulent waves to alter the flow.

That’s when i first met her.

Touching her was like food to a pauper
Her skin smooth like a silk wall
Her body soft like sheep wool

That’s when i first touched her.

Holding her in my arms,
Being with her all my life
...was never imagined
For it never happened
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 7:31 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Louis. Love, Carol
Muhereza Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 4:21 AM
THANKS Carol.....am honored. louis
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January 30, 2012 at 5:47 AM
Lovely poem you written Louis. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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