Crush
Susie sassed some stupid scoundrels
they tried to take her treasure
Bobby blew back barbaric barbs
Susie shook some soot off her sweater
lovely little lights lit the large lake
promising perfect midnight persuasions
Susie sat still staring silently
bobby won't be back before breakfast
he had his handsome hazed gaze on her
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