Ann Gilmour Poet Haiku

Crumpled Wings

  
a chrysalis shudders 
   crumpled wings 
      spy the light

         sheer beauty takes flight ~~~
 


Written 20th March 2021

Contest LETS GET CREATIVE WITH HAIKU
Sponsor Constance La France
2nd Place

Contest ALL YOURS (Mar 23)
Sponsor Brian Strand
FIRST PLACE

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Constance La France March 24, 2021 at 3:25 PM Ann, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative With Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this wonderful non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance Ann Gilmour March 24, 2021 at 5:12 PM Thank you so much dear Constance for my win in your challenge and so pleased I got it right, haha...thanks for your lovely words dear Constance and thanking you for your wonderful contests. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman March 23, 2021 at 10:38 AM The birth of beauty in a butterfly, Ann. Really enjoyed this wonderful, creative haiku. Double congratulations for your winning haiku! Sending you the blessings of butterflies and spring! Ann Gilmour March 24, 2021 at 5:11 PM Bless you dear Sam and thank you for your lovely comments and congratulations. Butterflies and spring what a wonderful thought... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 7:02 PM I really love this one Ann:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Ann Gilmour March 23, 2021 at 2:37 AM awww thank you dear Jan so pleased you loved it... with kindest thoughts and hugs from Ann xx

Kim Merryman March 22, 2021 at 4:41 PM Love the image you made! Congrats on your win, Ann! Blessings, Kim M Ann Gilmour March 23, 2021 at 2:37 AM many thanks Kim for your congrats and kind comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2021 at 2:20 PM very creative AND lovely. I really like yours a lot. Congrats in the contest. Ann Gilmour March 23, 2021 at 2:36 AM Thank you so much Andrea for your encouraging and kind comments, so please you liked it... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 22, 2021 at 1:01 PM - Congratulations on your second place in the contest, beauty takes our hearts Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ann Gilmour March 23, 2021 at 2:35 AM Thank you dear Anne-Lise for your lbeautiful words my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier March 22, 2021 at 6:55 AM beautiful, Ann ~ Ann Gilmour March 23, 2021 at 2:34 AM Bless you dearest Line ~ hugs Ann xx

Tom Cunningham March 20, 2021 at 6:50 AM Love the imagery Ann, I have a butterfly in my mind. Hope you're well and enjoy your weekend. Tom Ann Gilmour March 21, 2021 at 2:05 AM yes Tom such an awesome sight when that slightly crumpled butterfly emerges - a miracle for sure... With kindest thought Ann xx

Vijay Pandit March 20, 2021 at 6:30 AM Beautiful imagery, Ann--the ending line is awesome! Ann Gilmour March 21, 2021 at 2:02 AM Bless you Vijay for your great comments, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 20, 2021 at 6:16 AM Gorgeousness. xomo Ann Gilmour March 21, 2021 at 2:02 AM Wow I love gorgeousness... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar March 20, 2021 at 4:12 AM Lovely ending twist. All the best. Ann Gilmour March 21, 2021 at 1:59 AM Thank you so much dear Victor, wirh kindest thoughts Ann xx