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Crumpled Wings

a chrysalis shudders crumpled wings spy the light sheer beauty takes flight ~~~
Written 20th March 2021 Contest LETS GET CREATIVE WITH HAIKU Sponsor Constance La France 2nd Place Contest ALL YOURS (Mar 23) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Constance La France
Date: 3/24/2021 3:25:00 PM
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Ann, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative With Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this wonderful non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/24/2021 5:12:00 PM
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Thank you so much dear Constance for my win in your challenge and so pleased I got it right, haha...thanks for your lovely words dear Constance and thanking you for your wonderful contests. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/23/2021 10:38:00 AM
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The birth of beauty in a butterfly, Ann. Really enjoyed this wonderful, creative haiku. Double congratulations for your winning haiku! Sending you the blessings of butterflies and spring!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/24/2021 5:11:00 PM
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Bless you dear Sam and thank you for your lovely comments and congratulations. Butterflies and spring what a wonderful thought... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2021 7:02:00 PM
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I really love this one Ann:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2021 2:37:00 AM
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awww thank you dear Jan so pleased you loved it... with kindest thoughts and hugs from Ann xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/22/2021 4:41:00 PM
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Love the image you made! Congrats on your win, Ann! Blessings, Kim M
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2021 2:37:00 AM
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many thanks Kim for your congrats and kind comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/22/2021 2:20:00 PM
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very creative AND lovely. I really like yours a lot. Congrats in the contest.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2021 2:36:00 AM
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Thank you so much Andrea for your encouraging and kind comments, so please you liked it... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2021 1:01:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your second place in the contest, beauty takes our hearts Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2021 2:35:00 AM
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Thank you dear Anne-Lise for your lbeautiful words my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2021 6:55:00 AM
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beautiful, Ann ~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2021 2:34:00 AM
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Bless you dearest Line ~ hugs Ann xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/20/2021 6:50:00 AM
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Love the imagery Ann, I have a butterfly in my mind. Hope you're well and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/21/2021 2:05:00 AM
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yes Tom such an awesome sight when that slightly crumpled butterfly emerges - a miracle for sure... With kindest thought Ann xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/20/2021 6:30:00 AM
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Beautiful imagery, Ann--the ending line is awesome!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/21/2021 2:02:00 AM
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Bless you Vijay for your great comments, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/20/2021 6:16:00 AM
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Gorgeousness. xomo
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/21/2021 2:02:00 AM
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Wow I love gorgeousness... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 3/20/2021 4:12:00 AM
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Lovely ending twist. All the best.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/21/2021 1:59:00 AM
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Thank you so much dear Victor, wirh kindest thoughts Ann xx

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