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Crumbling World

CRUMBLING WORLD My world was good with you beside me day by day. Together I was certain that we could beat the world, come what may. I revelled in the situation, heaven-sent. But then, no explanation as to what it meant, you simply slammed the door and went. So now my world has crumbled like decaying wood 16th June 2019 Crumbling Rhyme Contest Sponsor - Dear Heart

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Date: 6/30/2019 7:11:00 PM
Bryn congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for my delay in visiting ~
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Date: 6/30/2019 6:36:00 PM
perfect title to accompany your sad poem, congrats on your win Bryn:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2019 10:00:00 PM
I was captured by the poignancy of your beautifully expressed poem, Bryn. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/25/2019 12:02:00 PM
very well done, Bryn. Congratulations on your win.
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