Bryn Strudwick Poet Rhyme

Crumbling World

CRUMBLING WORLD

              My world was good
        with you beside me day by day.
      Together I was certain that we could
        beat the world, come what may.
  I revelled in the situation, heaven-sent.
  But then, no explanation as to what it meant,
    you simply slammed the door and went.
  So now my world has crumbled like decaying wood

16th June 2019
Crumbling Rhyme Contest
Sponsor - Dear Heart

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Constance La France June 30, 2019 at 7:11 PM Bryn congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for my delay in visiting ~

Jan Allison June 30, 2019 at 6:36 PM perfect title to accompany your sad poem, congrats on your win Bryn:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley June 25, 2019 at 10:00 PM I was captured by the poignancy of your beautifully expressed poem, Bryn. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2019 at 12:02 PM very well done, Bryn. Congratulations on your win.