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Crumbling

"I must write often so, I won't crumble . . ."
Oh, I must write, or fall into shattered pieces; so, I pen my poems all through the night, oh, my masterpieces . . . I love decay . . . like crumbling buildings, walls, grave stones, the withering- of a word on a page that moans; I must pen my sadness that groans, must, must write- so I will not crumble out of sight. ________________________________ May 24, 2019 Poetry/Crumbling Rhyme/"Crumbling" Copyright Protected, ID 19-1146-608-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.
My new invented form I call, Crumbling Rhyme
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Mcguire Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 6:38 PM
Absolutely and utterly fabulous!
Mcguire Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 6:38 PM
A FAV for Me!
Roper Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Beautiful verse, Dear Heart, I love the feeling of emotion and feeling. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting and for the comment ~
Adams Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 7:00 PM
I really like your invented form, perhaps if time allows i will try my hand at it! nice poem by the way :)
La France Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Sandra, thanks for liking my form. I do hope you will give it a whirl ~
Messina Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 7:36 PM
Great example for your contest Constance. Love the poem and the new form. I hear my pen calling :)
La France Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 7:35 AM
Charles, thanks for the compliment and I am looking forward to your poem ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 2:49 AM
I really like this new invented form by you and want to try it Constance. Poets feel that constant urge to write. Beautifully expressed! : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Connie, thanks for the compliment about the form, I am always looking for new and interesting layouts, I bet you write me a beauty !
Warrior Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 8:55 AM
We all (poets) yearn to write...even though the world is crumbling beside us...great example DH...lots of love, and love your contests...^WW^...{*J*}
La France Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 7:00 PM
WW thanks for visiting and looking forward to your entry ~
Scars Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 5:48 AM
amazing poem Dear Heart, great example for the contest! :) -luloo Be blessed
La France Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Lu thank you so much for the compliment ~
Michael Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Nice one...sometimes I feel like your poem...All the best Dear Heart
La France Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 10:54 AM
Arturo, thank you for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate
Allison Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 3:07 PM
Beautifully created Constance I love your new form, I too must write, I need to write when I need to write so i totally understand xx
La France Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting and the beautiful, happy you like my new created form~
Sands Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 1:55 PM
Well written :)
La France Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Thank you Heidi!
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