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Cruising With the Sky

By duskfall, I cruise with the sky, throwing life’s pebbles unto ripples of yearning… and she lifts her veil against the moist air fondling the blue of night unto my pale meadow…she whispers before an interlude, refreshing my senses; a warm potion to my languid thoughts and pierced refrains, delicately whisking shadows and cluttered notes: her luster bequeathing new facets of hue and a gleam for sweet beginnings reaching for my wet skin with a melody like a passage from tear's soundtracks, then to grasp my wish on her halo. Laying on columns of grass, I rise to feel the sky cruising with me in the meadow. Craig Cornish's Debussy Contest 6/10/2014 .

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Date: 6/17/2014 3:51:00 PM
Your words are like golden dew, Nette. Another beautiful win. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/12/2014 7:11:00 AM
Wonderful as always , I would cruise with you anytime , Can't promise you'd be home early though , lol
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Date: 6/12/2014 12:27:00 AM
wow, Craig is just gonna flip with this one!!! Beautiful, Nette.
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Date: 6/11/2014 6:47:00 PM
I have one simple comment on this poem of yours BEAUTIFUL, I'm glad I stopped to read this marvelious work today cheri
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Date: 6/11/2014 4:49:00 PM
Reads like winning material..Very sensual work...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/11/2014 3:01:00 PM
Your words paint pictures that could scarcely be realized in art. What lovely, floating moments I found in this one.
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Date: 6/11/2014 9:59:00 AM
And a Big Big PS.....dear Nette !! Thank you so very much for the honor in your recent contest: I'm learning some new forms thanks to you....I'm so pleased and surprised! And so grateful ! Thanks again!!
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Date: 6/11/2014 9:57:00 AM
Like music itself..........wow, your poems leave a girl breathless !!! Stunning is this !!!
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Date: 6/11/2014 8:58:00 AM
And free-floating, am I; especially after that.
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Date: 6/11/2014 8:48:00 AM
A read more beautiful than light. What a pleasure. Best of luck with the comp.
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Date: 6/10/2014 10:06:00 PM
A fanciful and endearing verse, tough competition. Light & Love
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Date: 6/10/2014 9:28:00 PM
Oh mercy me Nette, you never cease to amaze...Every line and every verse is elegant and SO compelling. Your style is unique and unmistakable...Go directly to favs, do not pass go...
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Date: 6/10/2014 8:43:00 PM
I am drawn to a pensive kind of sadness in this poem, yet the sky like a symbol, keeps you grounded. The way the images come together is like a form of music. Nette, I was holding on to every line!
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:55:00 PM
How lovely... I love the imagery with the sky nette...hugs Tim
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