Cruising With the Magic Mat

On a magic mat
cruising over seas with friends
to enjoy this fresh
scenes of nature;sun blazing,
like kite and eagle,we glide.

As it moves across
the forest,hills and valleys
'Wow!' I almost fall
Deb and Gwen smiled at its speed
The feeling is simply.. cool!.





Contest:"Magic "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
A  Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 6:22 PM
O.A. , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
A   Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 12:50 PM
OLUSEGUN, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, always~PD=
Wellington Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Hope Deb and Gwen enjoyed that ride as much as you did Olu. Congrats on a big win! One love. Joy Wells
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations Olusegun what a wonderful ride and win xx
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 4:38 PM
Winner for sure..Glad that I stopped by...Sara
Sefunmi Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 4:07 AM
Good write Segun. Thanks so much for your advice. Pls, check the poem and see if it's okay now. Thanks
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 9:37 PM
this is a really fun read. I can see those two poets looking up at you on your magic carpet!!!
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