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Cruise Nightmare

In the middle of an ocean, a heavy storm raid... a ship capsized.

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Skat A

Date: 5/1/2013 2:58:00 PM

Hello A O, he he, this is a scary thought as well. LOVED IT! Thank you for sharing. I'll be back later on tonight if not on my next day off. How about naming a particular poem, on your list. I can't wait to read the poem you highly recommend. Take Care and have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2013 7:44:00 AM

Awesome Haiku..... very well done A.O. - - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2013 3:24:00 PM

Very unique and creative..Enjoyed reading this one today..I can't imagine what a person would feel and experience in that situation..You have expressed it very well..Thanks for stopping by... I am glad that you got a laugh..Sara

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/20/2013 12:00:00 AM

raided by the ocean...I like it...good image :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/14/2013 10:41:00 AM

This is beautifully sad poem my dear friend AO. This reminds me of the Titanic movie ;). It's an awesome haiku indeed! Thank you so much for sharing and also for your precious time stopping by leaving me an inspiring comment and warm congratulations on my poems. Good luck and wishing you all the best my dear friend! love and hugs, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2013 8:19:00 AM

Hi, there, this is nice. I'll go answer your soupmail now.

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/14/2013 5:47:00 AM

This is an awesome Haiku Abdulhafeez, you've done very good for the Ocean-ku contest...that is if you submitted it into the contest! What an outstanding poem, a lovely piece, Great Work!!