Cruise Nightmare

In the middle of
an ocean, a heavy storm 
raid... a ship capsized.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 1, 2013 at 2:58 PM
Hello A O, he he, this is a scary thought as well. LOVED IT! Thank you for sharing. I'll be back later on tonight if not on my next day off. How about naming a particular poem, on your list. I can't wait to read the poem you highly recommend. Take Care and have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 7:44 AM
Awesome Haiku..... very well done A.O. - - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 3:24 PM
Very unique and creative..Enjoyed reading this one today..I can't imagine what a person would feel and experience in that situation..You have expressed it very well..Thanks for stopping by... I am glad that you got a laugh..Sara
Susan Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
raided by the ocean...I like it...good image :)
Gasun Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:41 AM
This is beautifully sad poem my dear friend AO. This reminds me of the Titanic movie ;). It's an awesome haiku indeed! Thank you so much for sharing and also for your precious time stopping by leaving me an inspiring comment and warm congratulations on my poems. Good luck and wishing you all the best my dear friend! love and hugs, Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:19 AM
Hi, there, this is nice. I'll go answer your soupmail now.
Sivey Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 5:47 AM
This is an awesome Haiku Abdulhafeez, you've done very good for the Ocean-ku contest...that is if you submitted it into the contest! What an outstanding poem, a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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