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Cruelty of Life

Knocking on success’ door, irrespective of its intensity is worthy of a response and an attention. When life smiles and nature is happy, the one who passes their estate is embraced by favour to take luck home. Showcased by a tale of two counterparts of same platform but different worlds. He’s serious, but she’s playful, a test defining their progress into another phase is the huddle. From book to book, knowledge he accumulates even sweat’s discomfort is no match for such a determination which scares both life and death. His living is subjected into a miserable triangle; lectures, canteen and home is all he knows even his dreams have been converted to a library for research and a single spoken word from his lips pours out a barrage of wisdom. His understanding then gives an entire jungle the salvation of great civilization. Her time for merry is never taken for a joke, her schedules are tabulated by the inventors of fun, leisure and study share the spoil of her engagements, pleasure tops the yardstick for all her toiling and her indifference to progress in life makes the demons of failure lust after her course. Nineteen weeks of play and a week of work is her formula on the eleventh hour, before the day of reckoning she reads in compartments, choosing her focus through random selection. He commands the justification to succeed while she queues in the long line of fate. Passing through this is a decorated corridor to his success raising her hands in pathetic surrender is her bullet-less gun. He’s sure, she’s not; he’s ready, she’s frightened, he walks confidently; she does it in a gait-like manner, the heat of such examination he absorbs, but she gets burnt. What next, is the short incubation period of truth when several hearts await a straight forward judgement and comfortable minds anticipate a glorious confirmation with all efforts well deserving of the medal and a prosperous finding, a worthy result of true seekers…… She passed!..................... He did not!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/18/2016 5:21:00 PM
How amazing is this...the story/message...a 7..i love it
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/13/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Sarah Jabri
Date: 1/17/2016 9:12:00 PM
What a powerful epic write Funom! Wonderful!!
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/19/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Tammy Reams
Date: 1/16/2016 12:35:00 PM
Interesting work..Fate issues out some bad circumstances sometimes..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/19/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2016 9:42:00 PM
Truly a great and wonderful epic my dear friend, Funom. I enjoyed so much the read. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots, Leonora
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/19/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Galeo
Date: 1/14/2016 4:33:00 PM
how unlucky...and that must have happened with some string pulled right?...excellent write Funom
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/19/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so much White Sage

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