Karam Misra Poet Dizain

Cruelest Cut

There were times you called me vindictive names,
Said so many uncalled for things that hurt.  
You played so many emotional games  
And with my friends you did shamelessly flirt.
Was there ever a time I lost my shirt  ?
Despite your disdain and cruel intent  
Your burning barbs and maleficent bent  
Most steady, steadfast was my love for you
So t'was the cruelest cut when you went
Forever deserting a love that's true.

~14 May 2016~

Dizain -  Ten lines of 10 syllables each line rhyme scheme: A-B-A-B -B-C-C-D -C-D 
 Syllable count via www.howmanysyllables.com

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Skat A July 12, 2016 at 1:39 AM Nice win, Karama ...sk Karam Misra July 12, 2016 at 3:16 AM Thank you, Skat. ~karam~

Brian Davey May 21, 2016 at 4:39 AM A lot of hurt flows in these words great emotion in your write! congrats on your placement Karam Misra May 21, 2016 at 6:01 AM Thank you very much, Brian. ~karam~

Bl Devnath May 20, 2016 at 3:05 PM Breaking of faith in love, sad one. Congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Karam Misra May 20, 2016 at 8:41 PM Thank you, Dev. ~karam~

Beautiful Scars May 20, 2016 at 1:40 PM Karam, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo Karam Misra May 20, 2016 at 8:36 PM Thank you, Laura, for the placement as well as for the inspiration and encouragement to try new styles. Thank you, once again. ~karam~

Constance La France May 15, 2016 at 10:06 PM Karam, great write, the howmanysyllables is the more accurate Karam Misra May 15, 2016 at 11:07 PM Thank you, Broken. And howmanysyllables.com it is from now onwards. ¬kc¬