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Cruel To Give and Then Take Away

The wind would blow alluring strands of your soul, tickling seductively, weaving like a candle flame lyric, where it danced provocatively. You fondled the depth whirling to the surface edge taking a little hope with you; then flew away. You cannot ask and then leave me brittle. 1/4/2020

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Date: 1/17/2020 5:16:00 AM
"leave me brittle" - wow! This write is spot on amazing, my friend.
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Date: 1/15/2020 6:10:00 AM
A painful, yet honest pen. Beautifully done and goodluck in the contest.
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Date: 1/14/2020 10:09:00 PM
This is romanticism at her best, and captivating.
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