Cruel To Give and Then Take Away

The wind would blow alluring strands of your soul, tickling seductively, weaving like a candle flame lyric, where it danced provocatively. You fondled the depth whirling to the surface edge taking a little hope with you; then flew away. You cannot ask and then leave me brittle. 


1/4/2020
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 5:16 AM
"leave me brittle" - wow! This write is spot on amazing, my friend.
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 6:10 AM
A painful, yet honest pen. Beautifully done and goodluck in the contest.
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January 14, 2020 at 10:09 PM
This is romanticism at her best, and captivating.
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